Writing blog four

                                                        INTRODUCTORY POEM
Name: MOSY BOATENG
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I like green, that is my favorite.

Driving with Ama, my best friend since high school.

Mirror, hat, yellow dress, green shoes, coat, necklace, watch, snow boots.

Faster, we need to hurry to school.

Mirror makes my morning routine easy
Orange makes my skin clear
Show me your, and i will show you my boots
Bring my green boots for my big party
Yellow shoes are good for summer parties
Beware of Ama my friend
Offensive words hurt
Address issues with your family
Talk quietly when i am driving
Everything i do will be perfectly good
Going to school is my best times




Comments

  1. TomMarch 4, 2020 at 3:41 PM

    Mosby,
    One thing I have been hoping for is that you would weave more sensory details into your writing, just like you do in this colorful poem! Keep developing and weaving in the five senses and your poems will come to life!

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